Vale archer #2

[Jabberwocky]

Here is the second of a three pack of Reaper Warlord elves. Hit me with the critiques, please!

Vote if ya wanna

 

[Shawn R. L.]

Hooray!! Another person who strung their bow!! Critique? Mabey some MINOR highlighting on the hair and it appears that all the brown areas are the same brown. Might try using different browns for some areas.

 

[Highbulp Billy]

Lovely work on the bow (painting and stringing) The green is ver well done too though I personally would have used a different shade for the leggings (personal taste). And as Shawn said different browns for things like the quiver and scabbard or more use of shading the contrast them perhaps? Neverless, great work and have voted accordingly.

 

[Hinton]

Great work, Jabber. Definitely nice to see the string on the bow. Voted.

 

[Onis Lair]

pretty much the same thing here. Like the fact you strung the bow, the browns could have been differant shades for more contrast but still a solidly nice figure.

 

[misterjustin]

I think you got all of the feedback you need so I\'ll chime in with another \"nice work\" comment.

 

[Ritual]

This is a very nice mini, probably your best one so far (that I\'ve seen, anyway). The green looks really nice, whereas the brown could use a bit further highlighting and, as Shawn said, a bit of variation in colour nuance between the different items. Is it a mold line that runs across her hair (in the rear view)? It seems to have picked up a lot of paint when you highlighted the hair and this makes it extra obvious. You might want to \"hide\" it by painting shadows and highlights again running the brush along the hair strands and grooves with light and dark paint respectively.

 

[matty1001]

Good stuff, this looks great. Just try and brighten up the gold so it doesnt look as similar to the browns. Your best yet i must say!