I think you have done a great job, next time though mount your mini on a paint pot with blue tack, so you dont loose any paint, though fingers and chipping.
The only bit that sticks out as odd is the rifle back, looks too white!
Painting is very good. But it just bothers me that the rifle\'s stock and body are bad looking as metal, and even in fluff they are wood. They would just look so much better when painted wood.