Wardancer Musician- finished!

Ayla

New member
OK, well, as finished as it\'s going to get- got totally fed up with this mini, so have based it and chucked it on the site- not expecting a great score, but hoping for some constructive feedback!


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You can do the vote thing here should you feel the urge:D
 

treide

New member
Voted and left a comment. Gotta fix those eyes! There are some good tutorials on the site for eyes and faces. I like the braid and the drum.
 
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schmackeroo

Guest
yuor colours are neat and idy, and that is a very good start. all you need to do is apply that neatness with a little bravery and try to get some dpth into your work, either by sarting dark and working up or by placing the dpth onto the light.
hope i made sense:)
 

vincegamer

Active member
wow. pastel wood elves.

Okay, looking good. Nice job on the hair.
What is the difference between the pics? The second one looks much better than the first.
 

Ayla

New member
Thanks for the comments so far folks!

@Treide- I know the face is terrible... I must have re-worked it ten times before I gave up. I may go back to it!

@Schmackeroo- Not sure that I\'m totally understanding you, but think I am... my latest WIP is involving working up from black rather than down from white.. and that probably doesn\'t make sense either!!

@vincegamer- the difference between the pics is that the sun was out for one... I know I need to work on my photography too;)

Keep the comments coming folks, they really are very helpful to a novice like me:)
 

Hinton

New member
I can relate to getting fed-up working on a mini and wanting to just call it done.

You\'ve done some good work here. The colors look good and smooth. The base looks pretty good, too.

There are areas that do need some improvement, such as the face and highlighting/shading, but those have already beed mentioned.

Voted.
 

charlie121

New member
I really like the blue, face and eyes are something i find really hard to paint to and if i get a mini i get fed up painting i just give up so well done for finishing.
 
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