I looked your minis over and am quite impressed. I gave 7 and 8\'s on most. Your painting was well done.
A few things that would make them even better would be to take little more time on your bases.
I had a personal issue seeing grass on some, and large gritted sand on all. My vision of these creatures would be that they are Desert dwellers, and as such, the sand would have been of an extremely fine grit. There wouldl definitely have been no vegetation. And while that may seem a small criticism, and possibly a personal taste, I think it might be a popular opinion and , your minis might suffer a few points due to this.
I agree with Impernouncable that while done very nicely , the Sebeki Champion could have had more detail. I would not have used drybrushing as much or would have been more selective with it.
I was very impressed with the skin colors you chose on your Asar army, but found the color scheme to be a tad monochromatic and monotonous. A bit of a color breakup somewhere (blues or reds) would have gone quite far to break the monochrome feel of these models.
The shields were exquisite however. I particularly loved the leopard pattern on your Kemru Harbinger.
Your Heru sage was, I think, your best work posted here. Good use of color, and well blended. I do question why you posted it twice however. ???