I should mention that the shine in photo 1 is because I'd varnished the mini by then, and not in photo 2. The stuff I have isn't as 'matte' as it claims to be. 9_9
But, photo 2 is the clear winner! I'd accidentally posted both to the gallery (I thought I'd removed the first before posting the second,) and there was a full 1.1-point difference in score, with an almost-equal number of votes! I think combining what I'd done right in each pic would result in the best final product. Live'n'learn!
[EDIT] Okay, how's this one?