WIP Blood Angel veteran sergeant

[ColtheReaver]

Hi guys,

I'm looking for some suggestions on how to improve on this mini. The NMM on the mini still needs to be worked on I know but I need some other suggestions cos my brain is slowly turning to clay with this mini.

 

[Meph]

The nozzle of the hand flamer could use a treatment to have it look more metallic and the colour distored as if by heat (thinned ink treatments)

 

[Empchild]

the NMM's look more yellow then gold in appearance.

 

[SkelettetS]

Hi ColtheReaver!
i think you have a pretty solid mini there so no real suggestions from me other than to work the contrast of the metal areas a bit more, as you already mentioned.

 

[cheelfy]

So, as the others asid, improve the metals and highlight them up to white. I'd also suggest you to work more on the face, more highlights and try to put more colours on the face so as to make it more human.

 

[ColtheReaver]

Few more piccies showing what he looks like off the base. Some of you will notice this is the same base I had for the sanguinary guard I aws painting for GD. Sadly that mini met an untimely demise at the hands/paws of a ginger cat and has had to be put to rest View attachment 3574View attachment 3575