Why must people attempt things whle I\'m trying to get my thoughts down in an article?!?!... Oh, well...
Couple of things wrong:
Her far shoulder pad would not get any light, and if it did, it would be a lot less noticable than what the current color is.
Green cannot reflect orange!! There is no orange pigment in green, there is yellow, so thus the highlights would look yellower, like this comparison:
On the left is a swatch of color that\'s around the same as your gun, on the left is how it would look if orange light was on it. Notice how it\'s lighter, which gives the effect of illumination, but not orange.
Some things right:
You didn\'t highlight the black parts. Black absorbs light and color, so it cannot reflect orange back.
You also made a sort of \'Field\" where the light will go, but it needs to be more \"glowing\" by putting brighter colors near the source, and gradullay making them darker (ie, the armor closer to the light gets highlighted more than the one furthest).
Hope this helps!! :bouncy: