Yeah. Her face looks like she's been punched in the face. The armour looks nice. But you didn't name it. "Another mini" or "Another...etc...etc" is just laziness and cliche.
I like the metalic. NMM is popular now, but I really prefer the shiny armor. I also like that you kept it simple.
The shading in the face is way too heavy. This is one warrior woman who has gone a round with Tyson. Use more shades in smaller amounts in the skin. The rock her foot is on is nothing like the other rocks, and is kind of shiny. Looks sort of like she's standing on a turtle too.