Clean painting here...but it lacks shading and highlighting. It looks like a great basecoat however, and once you develop your skills with inking and layering you can bring them to this mini and the basecoat step will already be taken care of! I'm sure you will become much better, the accurate nature of your brush work demonstrates that potential, keep pushing paint and read a few tutorials on the web about ink shading and layering highlights, you'll get there. Cheers.