#83966

Naukhel

Active member
Right, then. I went and overspent. Bought myself a camera, which I\'m still learning how to use... So, slightly grainy photo, and incomplete work as it says, but looking for constructive criticism on what\'s done so far. This piece will not be posted in its completed form, here, but will be findable on Ebay when it\'s done.
All constructive input is appreciated.
Thanks in advance.
 
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douglasgreen

Guest
Hi,nice colours,the blues and yellow are great.The blue cloak could benefit from a little highlighting at the bottom more I reckon,hope that helps;)The pic seems ok too(I\'m no expert either:) )Cheers

Duende--thanks for link:)
 

EricJ

Active member
no need to worry TOO much about learning to post links, as you\'ve seen, a link will appear soon enough, although it doesn\'t hurt to put one up in your initial post.

As for the figure. First it does seem like your focus is a little off in your photo, which makes it difficult to comment on fine details, as we can\'t see the quality of the blending, etc... The model however does look a touch flat, and could definately benifit from additional shading throughout. While personally I dislike yellow/blue combo, I think you\'ve used it effectively in the overall scheme, however the dark tan of her corset doesn\'t seem to fit real well. Also you\'ve added a nice touch with blue eye-shadow to accent the top part of the model with blue to reflect the blue dominated lower half, perhaps a splash of yellow in the bottom half would add to the dynamic of the piece?

I think the most important thing I can offer is, paint more! try new things, and figure out that camera so we can give even better feedback!

Keep it up,

Eric
 
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Shadzar

Guest
Originally posted by Naukhel
Yes, Duende, definitely, thanks for the link. Another thing I need to learn to do, I guess. :)

it is easy. just type http://www.coolminiornot.com/

then place the number of it after that in this case 83966

so it would be http://www.coolminiornot/83966

no special coding needed as it will autoformat to a link for you.
 

Shawn R. L.

New member
I dont usually ding people for a poor photo. What you have done seems good to me. 7 at least. You could use more gradiations in the colors. Try to avoid using black to shade if at all possible. A good shade for yellow is to mix a little brown in with the yellow. Where the forehead meets the hairline a bit of reddish brown, blended both towards the hair and towards the forhead looks good.
 
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