no need to worry TOO much about learning to post links, as you\'ve seen, a link will appear soon enough, although it doesn\'t hurt to put one up in your initial post.
As for the figure. First it does seem like your focus is a little off in your photo, which makes it difficult to comment on fine details, as we can\'t see the quality of the blending, etc... The model however does look a touch flat, and could definately benifit from additional shading throughout. While personally I dislike yellow/blue combo, I think you\'ve used it effectively in the overall scheme, however the dark tan of her corset doesn\'t seem to fit real well. Also you\'ve added a nice touch with blue eye-shadow to accent the top part of the model with blue to reflect the blue dominated lower half, perhaps a splash of yellow in the bottom half would add to the dynamic of the piece?
I think the most important thing I can offer is, paint more! try new things, and figure out that camera so we can give even better feedback!
Keep it up,
Eric