This looks really good. I would continue to work at possibly pulling deeper shadows and a little brighter highlights, especially on the armour. I would say the shadows are a bit abrupt, maybe take a little more space to blend them into the midtone, especially on the parchment--it's a very abrupt transition from shadow to highlight, bring your midtones back. All in all, great job on this mini, I'm sure it looks awesome in person too!