Christmas Sophie (In May?)

[tzor]

Yes in May. There are a couple of odd things here. I used colored metalics for the box, for example. I still need to work on details and very very very thin lines.

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[Ogrebane]

Looking good. Two things tho. The top of the boots could use a bit of blacklining and the hooks on top of the wings look unpainted. Merry christmas did the vote thing.

 

[Fizl]

Definately one of your best efforts.

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Shaz

 

[desertdragon1964]

boots as said and toenails.DD

 

[Avelorn]

Well.. you\'re early out! Cute! I really like the bag of gifts.. especially that doll.

I think ogrebane covered the two things that stood out for me improving it. Have you tried working form a black undercoat? That will force you to boost the contrasts + give instant lining. I often alternate between white, grey and black it\'s a really helpful excercise.

A tip if you want finer and straighter lines is to use Vallejo brushes as they have longer britles. I use them mainly for that kind of stuff as I find them too limp for other stuff, but they excel when it comes to lines.