Thanks so much for the comments guys, and a big thank you to Mr justin and Tony Manero, the Italian stallion for their help with the photo\'s . Thanks to their all round aceiness i now present to you
THE VOTEY LINKY ba ba ba baa!
Thanks HakoMike, I will have to, HAVE to get me one of those teensey pens, thats such a great example on your marine! I am frustrated with myself with the scripture, as I can do it properley on small areas (such as the left arm purity seals and the right thigh parchments. But give me a larger area to work on and I go and balls it up
Looking at it again I totally agree with the hammer tops needing to reflect the light more. I think I was trying too much to make the hammers look like a different metal to the armour that I overlooked the light reflection.
I really struggle to thin my metallics, when I add water all the colours seperate and its then un-useable

Does anyone have the same problem and do you know how I can fix this?
In hindsight I totally agree about the scar colour, and will learn from it in future. ATM its pure dwarf flesh, whereas the rest of the skin is dwarf flesh, codex grey and graveyard mix, with bleached bone added for highlights. Will remember to make them more prominent in the future.