Wow! What mini is this? it does rock!!
Its hard to give constructive comments with the pictures, the black horses flesh looks totally flat and way to glosst to see properley.
Flames look cool, and I like the osl on the horses leg.
The green cloths look ok, the hightlghts are nice, and I love the dirt, but could definatley use some shading to add depth and contrast.
The silver grey areas look very flat too, although as this is a WIP could just be basecoated.
Welcome to the forums and hope this has helped a bit!