Khonner's WIP

[DMcc]

Excellent! I am sure it will come out perfect!

 

[Khonner]

Update on Lilith.. I feel that the flesh is pretty finished and I'm trying to figure out what I'm gonna do with her wings.. The first try, I'm not happy with, so I'm gonna soak em. Any feedback is welcomed! Thanks.

Khonner

 

[Sionid]

Looking good! Skintones smooth, nice blue-purple transition, and the face is beautiful. Actually, a closer pic of the face would be awesome, girl's eyebrows look on POINT but her eyes look like they might be a little off-kilter? Hard to tell.

 

[Canny]

Wow she has wings too. Looking spectacular the dress is amazing skin tones are great, nice variation. The eyes do look a little off but Best work yet buddy.

 

[Rothskin]

Nice work! For his colours i think the white is the best. Or dunno. The blue is magnetizing my eyes.

 

[Digganob]

Your not fooling me. How much did you pay your model to pose for your picture huh?

 

[Zab]

wow! leaps an bounds! When you do her wing try to pull some of that nice dress color up onto the underside of the wings with some very subtle glazes and it will ty together nicely. I want to say white wings but black might be very very cool...

 

[Khonner]

Thanks for all the feedback!! After I zoomed into the picture again this morning, I can see what some of you pointed out about the one eye.. I'm going to try to fix that tonight.. Looks like there's a hair on her dress that got into the paint that I need to fix as well..

Here's some progress on Katya's base.. This was the fifth attempt, I think, of trying to make the glass pane. I was a little nervous while I was "shooting" it out and shattering it. It definately needs more smaller pieces, which I have from previous attempts, but overall, I'm pretty happy with it.. All feedback is welcomed!

 

[Khonner]

I have fixed her eyes.. I'm not sure if I should put a catch light in them or not..

 

[Zab]

She's 54mm right? i think you can pull off a catch light.

 

[ten ball]

The black line on the bottom eyelids is to strong / dark. I would wash over with a brown / purple mix.

 

[Milosh]

PM, coming your way

 

[DMcc]

Nice, I like the dress and face.

I have fixed her eyes.. I'm not sure if I should put a catch light in them or not..

 

[Khonner]

Okies, update on Katya.. Still need a few touch ups, but I'm wondering if the shattered glass looks ok or not? More? Less? I need to add more brass ejecting out of the gun I think.. What do y'all think? Thanks!

 

[Zab]

I like it, but I want to see smaller pieces of glass. Mandatory ref pics:

And OSL. I think you need to do some OSL

 

[ten ball]

great scene, yes smaller glass. Maybe use crushed glass, sproket uses it for snow effect??

 

[Khonner]

Thanks guys, I though I broke up the smaller pieces small enough, but I will try some straight crushed glass. I just didnt want it to look like snow.. I might keep the chunk of glass on her foot.. I think it gives it movement effect, no? Might even try to make a chair..

Zab.. the OSL- do you mean the muzzle flash? I was thinking of glowing the big red button in the center, adding a little orange to the inside of it..

 

[Zab]

Yeah I was wondering how dark the room is and if the OSL from the muzzle flare would be good to add. Of course, if she's smashing into a brightly lit room then it wouldn't really show.

 

[KruleBear]

Cool scene!

 

[Digganob]

Frakin eh khonner. That scene is awesome. Agree with smaller glass but dam it's so cool.