Originally posted by generulpoleaxe
honest critique mate, not putting you down just trying to help.
the belt has studs on it yet they aren\'t painted, this realy does stand out and make it look unfinished.
the belt could do with the highlights bringing out more and the groin protector bit could do with some darklining.
try darklining the straps on the shield as well so that they stand out a little more.
i\'ll leave the nmm to someone else as i hardly use it nowadays and they will be able to give better critique.
as for the base, it looks unfinished.
the flock on the floor is painted the same as the stone, it would have been far better if it has had some brown added to it to represent loose dirt.
the flags and tomb are too clean, if it\'s an ancient tomb it would be full of dust and grime.
use some thin green and brown washes around the bottom of it to help add the grime.
for dust, literally use dust (it\'s free!) or you can use pigment powders.
hope that helps.![]()