I\'ll third Ritual\'s assessment. I think this is more than decent work, shows a good feel for the subject, ambition and developing skill. Just practice more - go for refinement, subtlety, more drama (increased contrast).
On the photos front, in addition to focussing more carefully (as well as using a smaller aperture if you can) I\'d definitely work on the lighting setup - abundant indirect (diffused) lighting is what you want ideally.
Einion