WIP critique please

Bastetcat

New member
Hope this is the right forum for this question!
This guy is about 60% done, and I\'m finding myself with some color decisions I\'d like other opinions on:


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The armor was supposed to be done (white with purple-ish shadows), but does it look too washed out? I could add some grey shadows. It started as a mix of Rainy Grey (neutral Reaper gray) + Liche Purple and a dab of medium blue, lightened up to pure white.
I\'m not 100% happy with the colors showing up on my monitor, so for reference, the top layer of fabric is Tentacle pink hightlighted with white. The middle layer and sheild is Tentacle pink with Warlock purple. The bottom layer is Warlock + Liche purple. The blade and crest are pure Jade Green, with a touch of ink wash in the recesses of a mix of blue and black ink. The worm is Pallid Flesh + Dark Flesh with a hint of Purple Ink, lightened up to almost white. His leather tail will be dark purple.

My questions are this:
1) this is my first NMM. For the worm\'s armor, I used Bronzed Flesh as my base as it\'s pretty close to the Vomit Brown (which I didn\'t have) that I saw in a \"recipie\" around here for Gold NMM. Mixing this with black made it greenish (I suspect Chaos Black has a lot of blue in it), so I used Scorched Brown for shadows, and white mixed with it for hightlights. Overall, it ended up looking way too brown, so I glazed it with Bad Moon Yellow, which improved it a bit. For the sheild, I used smakebite leather instead, which I think is a better Gold base. Perhaps I should be using Bleached Bone instead for hightlights? Any other suggestions for improvement?

2) I want a contrast to the pink/purple in the center. According to color theory, a blue-green (why I went with Jade Green) and yellow orange form a triad to the red-purple. My husband thinks the Gold NMM forms the yellow-orange part, thus the need for the blue green. I\'m not sure I\'m buying it! I did his gems and some of his belt items in shades of orange to add more.

Any help appreciated!
 
Well this is quite a bit to think about!

The white armor needs more shadows. You said that you want a purple hint to the shadows why not wash it with purple? That should then give you what you are looking for.

I like the gold NMM. For a minute I thought it was metalic with washes.

The pink on the shield and on the cloth both need more shadows and highlights.

The flesh tones on the worm look nice but the back ridges need more done to them, they look to purple.

I hope that this may in some small way help you out. :cool:

Jeremy
 

mickc22

Granddad!
I\'d \'glaze\' the armour rather than \'wash\' it with the purple, use a Glaze Medium rather than water. Build it up in several layers till you are happy.
I\'d have gone with the blue/green on the bottom fabric layer, as you already have quite a lot of \'pinks\' in there, what with the body of the worm as well
NMM\'s looking good tho, keep it up
-Mick
 
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Shadzar

Guest
i envy that wurms armor. :wow:

i am not sure about the riders armor. it looks a LOT white.

for the addition of blue/green i would say a brighter green or blue for the helmet plume. and maybe some glowing green for the riders eyes.

but that is just my $0.02 worth
 

Nelson

New member
It looks pretty good, although I think the armour could with a bit more shading....Try adding some shadows with liche purple+shadow grey, lightened with a bit of white. The pink could do with a few more highlights, and a bit more shading. It may just be the picture, but it looks a bit washed out. the gold looks nicely done, but if you are modelling it after Alexi_Z\'s champ, you might want to add some more white highlights.

Hope this helps. :)
 

mickc22

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EricJ

Active member
one thing I would add is that all the pinks are slightly different colors but all basically the same tone, and really too similar in color. When my eye looks at the mini it sees a sea of pink and it\'s hard to pick out details between them. One think that might help is there is three layers of robes, make the one closest to the mount a darker blueish, to really help define the rider as seperate from the mount. As they are now they flow together a little too much for me.

I agree the white needs more contrast as do the robes, build up shadows and I would go all the way to white on your highlights.

Looks good, I\'d like to see it finished!

-Eric
 

Bastetcat

New member
Originally posted by EricJ
one thing I would add is that all the pinks are slightly different colors but all basically the same tone, and really too similar in color. When my eye looks at the mini it sees a sea of pink and it\'s hard to pick out details between them. One think that might help is there is three layers of robes, make the one closest to the mount a darker blueish, to really help define the rider as seperate from the mount. As they are now they flow together a little too much for me.

I agree the white needs more contrast as do the robes, build up shadows and I would go all the way to white on your highlights.

Looks good, I\'d like to see it finished!

-Eric

ok, will do!
 
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