I think it looks very good, especially the cloth. I'd gladly accept it any time.
that said, the skin and the hair looks a bit flat from the pictures.
skin: some middletones to bring it to life. Now it looks too uniformly skin-colored-paint.
hair: 1 or 2 extra highlight to make it shine. Pushing the HL-s toward white would make it look more shiny. Right now it's a bit dull, as if it were unkept/dirty. Maybe that looks great and it's only a personal thing, as I like the shiny-looking-hair in minis.
also: it won't affect shows, where you'll be taking it, but you should take the mini to a photo-studio to have better images.