I need votes to get ranked

Hoblit

New member
I am trying to get a rank so that I have a baseline to improve on. I have two images that need to get to 50 votes.

Comments would be nice, but not necessary as I painted these about 2 years ago and I have a pretty good idea of what I was doing wrong.

The images are 100695

and 100691

Thanks
 

Ogrebane

Active member
I\'ll give you a comment anyway. The paint job is fairly clean. Not so sure about the color selection but I dont know much about eldar. If you based them you may pick up a point. You should try painting the gems as gems it would really help the mini and its only three colors so its not hard to do. NOt bad for table quality tho.
 

airhead

Coffin Dodger / Keymaster
the farseer looks like he had his face carved off ???

Go back and paint the area between the gold ribs a different/darker color (a wash or ink would work well here) and darkline the inside of the lapel where the gold spilled out. (neat and tidy.) Finally something needs to happen on the back of his head where it is a large red lump. a bit of darklining or a dark red wash would help bring out the details there.

don\'t feel bad, I thought I was pretty good until I posted my first pic up on my screen. Coulda swore someone stole my mini. lol

The larger wraitlords need just a bit of work on the bases and they would be \"tabletop\".

Finally - photography. The farseer was shot under incandesent (yellow) light against a yellow/orange wall. Ouch. Use the light correction on your camera or software. See my sig for a link to a diffuser and a blue/white fade background that you can print out.

The wraiths were shot from too high. A bit lower angle would help.

Ego bruised yet? No harm meant. Come on to the pub & I\'ll get you an e-pint.
 
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orctrader

Guest
I voted.

Not bad. Keep painting and practising and improvements are sure to follow. And once you get a ranking you will want to see it go higher.

:)
 
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