Provoke me i note some little progress expecially on the shading from the previous picture. If i can give you some advice:
I see the ink on cherubs is not water diluited or little diluited, you must put more water on the brown ink to avoid those dark spots, the Celestine face looks well shaded, now it needs some highlights.
About the armour it\'s not bad, but the sword color looks a bit flat.
The blue drape is not ok but you\'re on a good way to master the highlight tech, just put the lighter blue on the whole surface of the tissue stripes you have already started, and eventually put another strate with a more light blue after that.
I note some progress anyway! keep on!